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Very pleased to meet you. Thank you so much for this , its looks amazing. I have suggested a few changes. Highlighted in red as requested. The two sentences in red and ( ) to be removed and replaced by the red sentence at the end . I’m sorry to change your beautiful work. Thank you so much, it looks magnificent.

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Carlyle Labuschagne

Author: Carlyle Labuschagne, author of “The Broken Destiny”

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