Magnificent Work

Hi

Very pleased to meet you. Thank you so much for this , its looks amazing. I have suggested a few changes. Highlighted in red as requested. The two sentences in red and ( ) to be removed and replaced by the red sentence at the end . I’m sorry to change your beautiful work. Thank you so much, it looks magnificent.

Happy Holidays to you

Best wishes
Carlyle Labuschagne

Author: Carlyle Labuschagne, author of “The Broken Destiny”